Today we had to print off the first proofs of out front page, contents page and double page spread. We did this so that we could give each other feedback and constructive criticisms to improve our work. We were to work in pairs and go with a mark scheme to look at what was expected to what had been produced. I worked in a group of three meaning i got two sets or mark schemes with two sets of feedback.
From looking at both sets of feedback, both of the comments seem to be reffering to the same aspect. They both wrote for my improvements to perhaps change the image or more cover lines on my front page to stop any confusion of it looking like a fashion magazine. As it is my 1st proof i had intented on putting more cover lines on it anyway as as it is now, it is too simple and bare.
The two feedbacks also mentioned the best aspects of my magazine which were that my contents page and double page spread looked realistic and that the glitter i have included in the background is very effective.
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